Friday, June 10, 2011

FALLOUT

Today I would like to welcome Nick to the blog. Nick wrote an interesting story about a bomb in the future. It is a very creative story that I enjoyed, and I'm sure you will too! He leaves us hanging, but that's okay, I still liked it! ENJOY!!!

The year is 2517. We're in a war with the Chinese. Vault (spelling?) decided to make Vaults considering that the Chinese have nuclear weapons when people hear that the bomb hit Washington they loaded people into the Vaults.

JACK
We were fortunate enough to reserve a place in a vault. We are going to Vault 101. Some people didn't reserve a spot and will probably die when the bombs go off.

400 YEARS LATER
NICK
Happy Birthday son, said Dad. Thanks, I said. The overseer Doc Holiday said every boy & girl are ten once in their life and they have responsibilities. So I present you with pipbay. This is like a computer on your wrist and Happy Bday. Then we took a picture...

8 YEARS LATER
Alarms go off. I wonder what's happening and one of my friends, Madison, walks up to me and says, "NIck, your Dad is gone. He said. He escaped the Vaults."

"What? No one has been in or out in 400 years, when my great, great, great Grandpa Jack was reserving a spot and how did he get out?" I said.

"I don't know and they killed Doctor Jackson," Madi said.

Doctor Jackson was one of my Dad's best friends and mine.

"Who did it?" said a group of guards. Because they think that helped your Dad get out.

"And, here's a gun if things get tricky and please, ifyou see my father please don't kill him."

"I"ll try, but if he tries to kill me, what should I do?"

"Kill him if he tries, but at least try not to."

"Ok."

I encountered lots of people but when I came upon the overseer, he tried. I ran. I got to the Vault door and it looked like a giant lug nut with no hole. There was the control panel. I saw the overseer and shot him in the leg to stop him.

I saw Madison. I said, "Good-bye." Maybe if things get better I would come back.

"Okay." said Madison. "I'll try to reach you on ham radio. Bye."

She closed the door as I went out. The outside was a tunnel. I found the door, I went out. The sun was so beautiful but I had to find somewhere to stay. I started following a road and saw what looked like an arena. I went up to the door and there was a robot. I asked, "What's your name? What is this place?"

"This is Megaton, and I'm deputy. Robo, go inside please."

"Okay" I said.

When I went inside I couldn't believe my eyes.

1. An Atomic Bomb.
2. People!

I can't believe there's people I went up to a man who looked like the sheriff. I asked, "Were you in a Vault?"

"Well, you don't want to know my name."

"Oh yeah, sorry. I'm nick, and I'm Sheriff Sims, Lucas Sims."

"What's up with that bomb?"

"Well, it's live and I guess some psychos worship it by they built the town, so be thankful for that."

"Yeah, I could defuse it."

"You could? Ok. I'll pay you 500 caps."

"Uh, what are caps?"

"They're just pop caps that you pay people.

"Oh, ok, I'll check it out."

When I got there, I opened a hatch. And, oh my gosh, noooo.

SUBMITTED BY NICK.

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